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When ever season starts the grass is always green. Whenever we come out to play the weather can not be anymore perfect. During cold winter nights the grass becomes wet and slick, but during the summer heat the grass seems to loss all its moisture and makes it heavier to run on. Either way we play soccer and always have a great time. Crowds gather to watch the matches. Mothers and fathers of the player's come to show support. Everyone cheering on their team and bringing the atmosphere to life with the sounds of matraka. Soccer games all around and friends always near.
posted on: Josh's and Taylor's blog
posted on: Josh's and Taylor's blog
When we think about show vs. tell details, you want to really emphasize those show details, right? Keep in mind--what does the grass feel like, sound like, as you run to play? Is it cold enough to see your breath? Is there competition between players, agression toward a win? What does it sound like when the cleats hit the ball? There is a lot of things you could add here to really encompass the feel of a soccer match.
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